Voted For: Paranoid

Paranoid got this....

Inter you my homie, but stick too audio an text, ya topic lacked creativity an imagery, wasnt feeling it dog, way too short also.

Para, nice drop, evidently deeper, the scheme of the topic was alot more creative an you expressed your emotions thru the lines pretty good too, overall I dont think anybody would disagree that you get the win Para, good drop homeboy...

No hate Inter, if you are too start writing topics, try using more emotion an better imagery, i kinda got bored reading your topic even tho it was so short, you gotta make the voters wanna keep reading, ya feel?

No hate (obviously)

But para, rtf here:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=204757

or....vote will be removed homie

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