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Old 08-19-05, 11:39 AM   #26
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Voted For: Natural killa

killa........decent verse, you had a nice flow with some good hitting personals in there. try not to use the links in your verse becuz that is considered played on RV. anyway, some punches were weak, but a lot were hard hitting, u were real consistent in this battle, nice wordplay throughout, although sometimes you got a little basic, the rhyme scheme was cool and shit, you cud get a little more creative at times but overall some good shit.

montana.....nice flow, but to me your verse seemed a little basic in places, not as consistent as killa's was, ure punches were weak or average, maybe one or two hard hitters but mainly they need work, ure wordplay was ok in places, u cud try to beef that up and just get more creative with your punches for better affect.

overall i think that killa came more consistent in this battle and had the hard hitting punches and personals, both y'all need to drop the links and shit cuz they are played out but still good battle from both y'all.

V/ - Natural Killa
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