Voted For: Intermental

ok..lets brake this down...........

inter:
flowed well........
some nice punches....could be harder
structure...lines were little streched....
some of them have more words and that makes linesdifferent lenght....

metafo:
some hard punches....
flow wasnt as gd as inters.....
u had some different lenght ines too....
lol...some funny punches.......

overal:both of u did well......but i give this 1 for inter....
..............no hate..........

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