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Old 08-19-05, 04:46 PM   #5
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This Right Here Is Meh, Recite Your Shit A Little More Before You Record, So It Smooths Out Your Flow, Its Like You Got It Down, But At Certain Lines, U Didn't Correct How It Was Wrote, So Your Flow Falls Off, Then Back On, The Beats Aight, Work On What You Saying, But Ya Lyrics Aren't Trash, Just Not That Pifft .. But You'll Get There, Keep Doin Ya Thing, And Quality Means Nothing Keep At It ...
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