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Old 08-20-05, 12:13 AM   #4
Payn
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yea mayne i like diz piece it was different but overall concept was hittin, vocab was up 2 par, structure was a lil off but u can work on dat 4 tha next piece othawise tha topic u wrote was nice keep writing fam & hope 2 collab wit ya soon ~1~Luv~1~Thug~ fa sho 9/10
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