Voted For: -UNF-

i aint gota get real lyrical 2 get at u,14 wins off mc's dat pitful.
no girl a have sex with u..guess datz y ya name was a un-fuck-witabul.
a personal but it was wack
every mc in trigga town is a clown! & u mad cuzz im destine 4 more shyne.
and u just a "aol traveler" datz gon see "america-online"
first line truth secon line wack
how mc's like u brag?,nah i dont need a beat da write 2 fag.
neva get famous u couldn't "head-lines" if u were a "tight durag".
wow this was ook i guess
hi hater!...nah fam u not on my level so dont think i hate ya.
but da only time "pussy a have a buzz" its gon be a "vibrator".
most played concept it was jsut wack
i mean dis nigga im da meanest.......and your just a penis.
put ya "brain on ya pants" so u can really be a "JEaN-iUS".
ok but the set up was horrible could have been worded better
overall up ur vocabu need better personals ur best line was the one about tti lol but this wasnt a very good battle

Leavin You Torched-And-Finished, Scorched, With Your Corpse-Diminished
I Can Only Afford-A-Minute, So Im Gonna "Kill You From The Start", Like "Abortion-Clinics"
no personal but it was a good line
"MaRVJay" is a gimmick...This Faggot needs to just leave and let me just win it
Just Admit It My Flow's Just Infinite, You Told Me To "Set and Spit" this was ur worst line in my opinion
So I'm "Rippin This Cunt", I Can Tell-That-Ya-Sunk
Fuck It, Im Expellin-This-Punk! Cause Ya "Lips Bring In More Nuts" Than An "Elephants-Trunk" this was kinda played but it was funny lol
"Light Ya Up" Like A "Blunt", I'll "Stunt On This Runt", "Open You Up Like A Present" With My Lyrical Presence
Cause Facin Me's Like "Dieing In Jail", Your "Dead Before The End Of Your Sentence" good line
Slaughtering Peasents, Ya Rhymes Aint Worth A Pot To-Piss-In, You Try-To-Glisten But No One Wants-To-Listen
Have You Spittin And Missin, Throwin Lines Aimlessly At Me Like Youre Stevie Wonder-Fishing
lol played concept but it was mad funny
So Maybe after this battle MaRVJay will have learned
Cause all I did was cough on em and he had 3rd degree burns
not a good closer

overall u need to up ur vocab work on personals and ur structure for text battles ur structure isnt that good really that stevie wonder line was hillarious lmao i think u should do audio reading ur stuff it seems like u ave good flow

ok battle to both of u u both lacked personals though but props to both both of u work on creativity

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