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Old 08-20-05, 02:46 PM   #24
Willa
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
 
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who is this herb?? ur rec's nice.. but watch him get spanked this time..
and i know your eagor to get the win.. but kid im not doctor frankenstein..
not a very good opener kind of a personal i guess :/
UNF im not violent.. so dont take this personal when i say i might kill ho'z
and i would say that your skills are kosher.. but i think ur more into Dill Doe'
this was a played concept
i'll strap on my kicks.. and just put the steal toed boots to your back..
and you could have some construction shoes and still be toe tally wack..
no personal but this was a good line prob ur best
F.uck Y.our I.ntelligence shit kid you know that we are next to none...
So BQ give me a holla back girl.. cause its no doubt i've already won....
bad closer u glorified urself

u need to work on personals some of ur concepts are played so work on creativity the bott line was good thogh u have really good wordplay and structure but thats it

Look, I'll Put Yu Six-Deep And When The Clips-Reap And Have Ya Skull Bone Touchin-Maggots
Slaughter With Automatics, Topicals On Hetro Sex When On The Real You A Fuckin-Faggot*
a personla not a great one but yea i think hes fruity too
I'll Put The Lead-In-Waist And Have It Rip Thru Ya Dome And Knock Ya Head-Off-Place
Go For LightWeight Belt, Cuz Like Failures In Weight Watchers U Couldnt 'Cut It Wit HeavyWeights**
lol this was a played concept but ut was really funny and there was a personal
Why Run... 10 Feet And Im Like Lucifer I'll Leave Ya Staminia-Wrecked Each Glock Goes Bam-Thru-Ya-Chest***
Believe Me Dude TheOnly A's I Wud Even Come Close To Feel' Rests On Top Of Ya Girls's-Chest****
probably ur worst bar first was ok but the other was bad lol

.:: Finish It ::.
Readily Holdin The Glock-Bitch Ready To Pop-Triks Intendin To Stop-Kids
Dude Underestimated Me, He Turned A Blind Eye On This Battle Like I Cut Out His Optics
this was a good line creative and i think it was true ok im giving this to you because u had a few good personals and u made me laugh the optic line was the truth and it was funny
u need to work on ur structure and ur starting to use more personals but id like to see more
props to both but likee unf said i thik u underestimated him and dropped weak props to both though


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