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Voted For: Tha Q.
Aiite yall lets break this down:
I ain't tryna knock,I'm stating facts,and i don't like battlin a fag dreamin bout bein on top a other cats
he lame,it's why nobody askin for a 'Q-Tip' cause he already drop a lotta 'wax'(whacks)
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this was a good strong opener, personal, punch and creativity, very good opener
he denied the battle yesterday,accept 2day,c'mon Tha,grow some balls
cause,i mean, we all know how he 'pre-rights',like a four year old know it all
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Ok attempt I guess, this wasnt too great, kinda childish if you ask me
it should be a sin for you to bring the spit,& ya wanna put me under your wingjust to have something to stick
Bitch please,u only switched to gay,cause str8ness ain;t give ya anything to lick
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GAY LINES AGAIN?.....i think u made ure point, normaly to make reoccurin points doesnt show much in a battle but ok punch
damn model,checkin ya nose,askin bout our workout in LL,then stoppin to beg for a second to pose
and i hear U A VET?,well ya must owning only CD's cause you got no record to show
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set up was good...first line was hot...liked it...second...not too much...ok..good try
i'm mad dat da first queer dat i saw got his temper unlocked,happened to be pussy in the center alot
and it's clear the change to homo ain't work,he still beatin his meat to member mugshots
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lol...this was good....funny shit...back on track
only shots Q wants to do is ballin my mouth,talking about me ducking,but here he's stallin me now
cuz,i mean,look,he even gave ME props,makin a whole thread in LL about calling me out
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Ok line...not too complex...not really a punch
but it's sa'll good Q,take the losing as a quid-pro-pro,shoulda saved ya corpse with a no show
cause it figures you'd be whack,reppin benzino,with your aim as SOURCE CEO
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Ok good line here....we need a good closer for this to be a solid one
to me,this ain't beef,i think it's fun,bombarding a queer,wit his raps that stinks beyond some
but knowing you,sensitivity wieghts a ton,&you a 'dick-writer',like u substituting ink for cum
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SOLID...GREAT CLOSER...funny stuf...good wordplay
Tha Q:
I peeped ya shit..still ain't figured out which part was ya writtens
U gotta be kiddin, how da fuck u got more footnotes than actual disses
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Lol this was funny, good opener....
In good faith, I set this battle up hopin' for a small challenge
Ya rhymes wack fuel economy, stretchin' em out to get dat extra mileage
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Ok this was ok, not too bad,, but was set up good
Addin' dashes and quotations don't make what you wrote dope or blazin
It just mean u a joke, so face it..ya whole M.O. is to hate, kid
^^^That was good...liked this line..good punch
I'm an organic farmer harvestin' u herbs for this beef dish
I gave you all the ammo needed, u still couldn't defeat this
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It was set up real well dawg...but fell off...simple but maybe effective...
Instead you posted a thread thought you was revealin' a secret
But discovered you sonn'ed yaself when er'body called u a geek, bitch
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Not feelin this one sorry, too basic
Spittin' weak shit..what da fuck ur wack wit your anemic..
Flow-style broke-down schemes bitch..I'm rippin u into pieces
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likin the flow here...simple but effective this was a perfect example
Knee jerk ya ass until you achieve this..level I'm at cuz u squeamish
Scared to step up or dream shit..ya self esteem is dead, it seems it
^^^ lol the multies are killin me man....this is a good line
Logical to think it..dat I'm reachin' farther than you can ever achieive prick
Believe it..local rule say I'm K.O.'n this fool, don't starve..just EAT SHIT!
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HAHAHAHA good closer not as good there as NK but good
Lodown:
THA Q: LIKED URE VERSE, SOLID VERSE, LIKED IT ALOT, HAD THE MULITES, PUNCHES N FLOW AND FOR AN AUDIO CAT
THIS WAS REALLY GOOD......8/10...GOOD DROP...SOLID THROUGHOUT
NATURAL KILLER: YOURS HAD SUPER OPENER AND CLOSER...BUT IN THE MIDDLE IT JUS LOST IT....7/10...IT WASNT TOO SOLID...BUT MADE AN
EFFECT...BUT IMO HE HAS GOT THIS BATTLE
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