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Aight .Lola Cruez. II---i feel that you would do really good in topicals......but i really wasnt feeling yours.....i cant put my finger on it but your missing something...oh yeah rhyming words.....now i know that all poems dont need to rhyme but rhyming really shows off ones skill.....but my advise is stick to Topicals your obiously freggin ill at that......
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DQ-I was feeling your verse all the way through......nice imagery.....Killer metas.....and great abstract thinking.......nice piece here....Loved it......
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Aight i go for quality over quanity and thats exactly the story here......great drops by both but i gotta go with DQ.........Peayce
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