Voted For: Sincere

Sincere
the first bar was tight hahaha... i like the play on the cards, i thought it was gonna flop but it was pretty decent. The simon cowel/ American Idol lines was decent. I wasn't feeling the spritefull line and the cum line. The ending was straight. Flow was good, some concepts are overly used on here, but you found a way to switch it up in a clever way. The best bar was prolly the first one..You even had a line of wordplay.. you could step that up some. Seems like you wrote this in 10 minutes. Take your time and write up some better set-ups.


Sin'cere
the first bar wit the profile link, what were you tryna get at? The dinosaur line is overly used and not flipped creatively. the start of the second bar..

Like punches to ur face ill make them hurt like taking out a liver
You not the real sin`cere so like Drive-Thru Joints you do not-deliver
^^ what's wrong with this, is the double "like" in the first half.. that's annoying. The second half was decent at best. Your verse started to get weaker as you went on. And the last bar was a punch at yourself because it didn't rhyme and you said "he lame at rhyming" in that same bar. And your metaphors were extremely basic, work on better set-ups for metaphors if you gonna use them. -_-..

I don't know who either of you are, just ran into this battle to see which verse is better.. Y'all both could do a little better, but eh.. It was a decent battle.

My vote's the Sincere without the apostrophe.

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