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Old 08-20-05, 05:43 PM   #3
Hitchcock
 
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this joint was ok. some verses were better than others. yall need to work on puttin more punches in ya verse or some multies or somethin so its not as bland ya feel me.

one mic's best bar
I just cock back, fire, then release my grip
Everybody gets shocked, like hearin Jesus spit
^nice solid bar, i was feelin that one

opt1k's best bar
nigga front the musik bitch i'll have ya ass shot
cuz our lyrics kill mc's,are beatz be breakin speaker wattz
^this was ok pretty basik tho. ya need to work on ya flow

Lyrical mage best bar
I sit here slow as molasses writing freestyles while time passes And after a battle I always rise up like a phoenix from its ashes
^you ha dthe best vocab but your flow n structure were all over the place

knaledg1 best bar
Hea I go ready to blow like a lethal weapon,
I'll knock yer' ass out like a game of Tekken,
^ i liked this bar jsut cuz i aint heard Tekken in a while n it was a good bar too tho

overall this coulda been alot stronger i give it a 6/10 but its was decent
returnt he favor. Links in the sIG
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