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Old 08-20-05, 06:24 PM   #5
Payn
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yeah i like da plot of diz in tha 1st chapter it'z jus like R. Kelly's Trapped In Tha CLoset joint i like it alot, vocab, tha situation is so real & i can relate 2 it, structure was great keep writing Ton u got diz imagery shit locked up 10/10 good work
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