this beat isn't bad...but u needed way more breath control to ride it betta...cuz ur flow came off jerky...jus a tad


ur lyrics aren't bad


and ur voice comes off well on this track

quality is pretty coo

I like @one point how u attempted up ur delivery by enunciating the words "ing"...etc


and I took ur virginity?

hahahahaah

YEA!!!!!!!!!!


sike

not a bad drop

creative

only thing taking away from it was ur flow


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