Aight...lemme break this down...

The concept first of all was very interesting and allowed you to put a lot of imagery combined with raw emotion in it. I love how you divided it into different parts expressing several aspects of the path of a warrior. The vocabulary was excellent, you had a high level of complexity yet it remained understandable. The flow was a bit off here and there but nothing too bad. The emotion was definitely there, it had a very powerful vibe to it. The imagery was the best though: very vivid. It was as if I was in the middle of it all myself.

Definitely HOF

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