L.E...u have good lyrics and I like ur voice

but u ride beats wrong...it's like u choose the "down"beat to flow on versus riding the whole beat or the "up" beat...It's like if u count 1,2,3,4...white people clap on the 1 and 3...black people (with rhythm) clap on the 2 & 4...Experiment with flowing on different points of the beat...cuz it makes ur flow sound jerky and choppy...ur not owning this beat at all...

but I like ur presentation other than that

pretty decent track homie



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