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Old 08-21-05, 05:47 PM   #34
chip
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i like your diary. i was goin thru some of em and noticed some funny shit: ain't none of these the same. u got verses on yours, i got str8 chaos on mine, and UNF has an actual diary on his. makes me feel like i'm doin somethin wrong. anyway, your verses on here are sick. lyricism iz the key. try stretchin your vocabulary; usin words and flow styles u don't normally use. nice diary playa.
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