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Originally Posted by Kon
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Originally Posted by NaRc-UzI
5)why dont you have no life
6)Why are you so wack
7)Why dont you have a life
8) why u make ya-self look like a prick
9) why u stuck on a monitor
10) why is a hard-drive hes life
11) why was he down with trigger town inc
12) why is anything that is gay have to invold N.K
13) why u still on TONY GREEN DICK, shit lay off sometime u making hes shit turn colors it needs oxygen losen up on ya lip-lock u got on hes dick... EZ!!
my fult i promiss this is my last time quoting this lmfao its just funny as hell to me.....
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omg...what the fuck are you doing inside of this thread?Tony green...keep your herbs outta here.You gettin the whack members in your crew to raid this thread.Shit..keep em out nigga.
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Originally Posted by Kon
send-ya-troops, i 'choke you out' worse than 'nuclear holocast', smokin a blunt, with 'lung cancer', and-a-noose...
im the new reaper in R.A.W you can ask a 'friend-or-two', you can call me Hitler the way imma put and end-to-jew(you)...
as my punches 'pound-ta-ya-face' with an 'ounce-of-this-rage' i 'denounce-ya-fame'...
cuz you 'beatin me' is 'unheard of', like seein someone actually pronounce-ya-name... (marvenjay1009)
marv, beating me is harder then making water BENT or TWIST...
couldnt 'feel ya shit' if my hand was 'up your ass' like a 'ventriloquist'...
I tried to be nice but u had to be a bitch so i got one thing to say FUCK-YOU...
i'm like a Judge in a court cuz I'm always couple of steps ABOVE-YOU...
marve u about to get Served and Burried..
still thinkin theres chance to win?,
you must be 'High-man'(Hymen) like Virgin-Cherries...
Apoc tha 'dick gymnast' 'swinging from pricks' After my shit youll turn ‘forums into sex activities’ postin ya ‘fuck this thread’ fits //*
Religious? Ya last ray of hope diminished
cuz its like kon burning ya bless'in like my heat was fryin christans'...
Face it, ya pathetic in scripts, ya stuck jockin district....
notice u aint on no crew, probley cuz he get more 'fuck no's' than nasal porn flicks.. EZ!!
EASY!!!! mother fucker.....
IF U DONT GET MY WORD-PLAY OR PUNCHES DONT VOTE...
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OK...first...lemme say the problems here.
1-You offically have the whackest line ever.
"cuz you 'beatin me' is 'unheard of', like seein someone actually pronounce-ya-name... (marvenjay1009)"
^^wtf is this?MarvenJ?...tell me one thing hard to pronouce about that?I neva seen whacker.This line was actually so bad..marvJ actaully had to put that in his sig.Just shows how ridiculous this line was.That's the first time an oppenent qouted another guys's line which was sopposed to diss.
2-Your structure is as newbish as it can get.First...you sopposed to write it like a verse line for line.You had like 5 paragraphs separated from each other.Only herbs puts qoutations in they shit.And you don't need hypens to point shit out.That ain't neccasary as it's whack enough to see it..you don't need to help us see it.And last..stop with the shit at the end(//).That's another thing only newbs do.
3-You were making absolutely no sense with a lot of your shit.you had lines talking about some shit about apoc..and shit.Wtf does that have to do with anything?Plus I heard that exact same line before.I can prove it..you bit.And to bite a line that whack is stupuid.
4-Your multis were forced as fuck.Don't even use multis if you a newb.Focus on punches.read the tutorials.
5-You talking about "don't understand wordplay..then don't vote"..your shit was basic as fuck.
6-You said.."EZ' at the end of your verse...when in fact you spit the whackest verse I ever seen.
Now..I can't believe I wasted so much time on you.Just leave this thread.I'm talking to TG.Not Narc-Uzi or you.Just by how whack your verse was I don't even need to read MarvJ's one..he's a proven battler n he woulda beat you with his worst shit.You are a herb at his finest.Now keep replyin in this thread...I;ma just ignore you..you shouldn't even rap.PERIOD.