Originally Posted by Natural killa

omg...what the fuck are you doing inside of this thread?Tony green...keep your herbs outta here.You gettin the whack members in your crew to raid this thread.Shit..keep em out nigga.




OK...first...lemme say the problems here.

1-You offically have the whackest line ever.
"cuz you 'beatin me' is 'unheard of', like seein someone actually pronounce-ya-name... (marvenjay1009)"
^^wtf is this?MarvenJ?...tell me one thing hard to pronouce about that?I neva seen whacker.This line was actually so bad..marvJ actaully had to put that in his sig.Just shows how ridiculous this line was.That's the first time an oppenent qouted another guys's line which was sopposed to diss.

2-Your structure is as newbish as it can get.First...you sopposed to write it like a verse line for line.You had like 5 paragraphs separated from each other.Only herbs puts qoutations in they shit.And you don't need hypens to point shit out.That ain't neccasary as it's whack enough to see it..you don't need to help us see it.And last..stop with the shit at the end(//).That's another thing only newbs do.

3-You were making absolutely no sense with a lot of your shit.you had lines talking about some shit about apoc..and shit.Wtf does that have to do with anything?Plus I heard that exact same line before.I can prove it..you bit.And to bite a line that whack is stupuid.

4-Your multis were forced as fuck.Don't even use multis if you a newb.Focus on punches.read the tutorials.

5-You talking about "don't understand wordplay..then don't vote"..your shit was basic as fuck.

6-You said.."EZ' at the end of your verse...when in fact you spit the whackest verse I ever seen.

Now..I can't believe I wasted so much time on you.Just leave this thread.I'm talking to TG.Not Narc-Uzi or you.Just by how whack your verse was I don't even need to read MarvJ's one..he's a proven battler n he woulda beat you with his worst shit.You are a herb at his finest.Now keep replyin in this thread...I;ma just ignore you..you shouldn't even rap.PERIOD.