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Old 08-21-05, 11:10 PM   #11
chip
pain is weakness leaving the body
 
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ok.......... nice flow and rhymes were nice. didn't make much sesne when u read it all together, but free's usually don't. too bad u got beef wit Trigga Town, we might have been able to do a collab. ah well, fuck it. 7/10, keep it comin.
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