Voted For: DJ BANANAZ

yvonne, nothing really stood out, your punches didn't have flow or creativity, and really hurt them. no personals, which can really influence a battle. structure was fine, but that adds little.....you really need to work on creativity and wording of punches. get right to dissin' him, don't focus on other stuff, and try not to make punches about his dick, because how the hell would you know. get more creative, expand your horizons a little, think outside the box, elevate

dj bananaz, nice verse man, i see you've elevated from the last time i read your stuff, you really put a packing on her. you came out consistent with punches, that really seem to connect and your verse had a nice overall flow, which really brought everything together....overall, you did quite nicely, but i feel you lack some creativity in punches as well; getting off into some played shit, thats bad, try and avoid that, but you've elevated quite a bit, so continue along, good work man

rtf on this http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d=1#post2383335

v/dj bananaz

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