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Old 08-22-05, 12:42 AM   #32
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Voted For: Daubs

no hate, im cool with both ya'll too, so word up homies

thought daubs took this one, unf, ya didn't really have concentrated punches, and by that, i mean focused on daubs.......uh, some were just too random to be effective, like you were just freestyling for kicks infront of a crowd, not really good disses, not bad though, eminem line wasn't bad, just didn't think you kept it consistent....but keep up, ya been elevating pretty good man, word up

daubs, not the best from you home boy, but enough....seemed kinda weak, and lacking enthusiam and creativity...tryna get too complex with your wording and concepts, is what it looks like....dont' force shit man, it will only strain the verse.....but not bad, liked the first line and the sig one, good shit......keep up to both

v/daubs, rtf on this http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d=1#post2383335
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