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Old 08-22-05, 10:05 AM   #26
Dirty Nigga
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Voted For: Blac-Out

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Not a good verse, wasnt feeling the seperation of bars...Few hard hitters tho, Closer was good, an you opened ya verse better than Blac-out too....Structure was awful, an wordplay was nothin too, kind of basic, Need to be more creative an use ya punches more efictely, good attempt tho

Blac-out:

better verse from you, Puns were straight, opener was weak tho, Could of used the clip line more effectively, Turned it into a punch instead of just gunplay, but other then that, not much i can fault, you get my vote homie....

RTF Here: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=205031
or my vote will be removed

Vote=Blac-out, more consistancy in his drop.
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