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Old 08-22-05, 10:08 AM   #20
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Voted For: King Solo

King Solo:
This kids mistaken for talent, but he’s really only a beginner
Cuz with over 100 posts a day, Natural still fails to deliver
true personals are good, but this doesnt hit very hard
Picture ya self as a vet, dude ya misplaced ya self in a day-dream
Puttin on a new ‘Face’ kid, but ya still ain’t makin’ the ‘A-Team’ good wordplay, nice punch
Ya believin’ a depiction of fiction, but in reality I’m the killa, that’s factual
So there ain’t no stoppin’ me killin’ you all cuz dude……, it’s just natural
ok.......doesnt really hit too hard
And yo I got 'wordplay' for ure ass, watch as I 'scrabble' ya brains
And my 'structure may seem demolished', but u’ll be 'left in remains'
first line is bad, because u mean scramble, not scrabble...2nd line doesnt make much sense without the explanation
I’d say my punches were false, watch him get confused by my verses
Cuz Natural’s idea of a 'pair-a-docs' is a 'duet of hospital nurses'
not bad, not that good either
See the look on ya face, did I lose ya? Sorry, I know that ya slow
But it’s cool, if ya wanna know why ya lost……just look down below
lol, good closer, could also refer to his verse, even though that wasnt intended

overall- good verse, 2/6 punches were really good (a-team, look below) ur problem is that most of the punches dont hit that hard...

natural killa:

70 wins from dickriders but i'll say u suck freely n give u a throw
n I'll slap you to have ya spirit's in circles so you'll really be soul-o
his record really isnt something u should draw attention to
I'l shoot your mother with paste,kill her,n give yo brother some spray
king?well u outta flirt wit the referee's,cuz u won't try-ump. another way
doesn't hit very hard, but not bad
nK's packing heat like cherynobyl n attacking the weakest nobels
solo sukin testicles with glitter,cos his whackness is known glow-ball
that hit harder than any of ur other punches, pretty good
come from the back quietly n strike with knives n tumtacks all alike
n fractured jaw n broken spine cos you ain't get no feedback on open mics
didnt hit hard at all
his punches are like water, barely tapping me being so ineffectual
like virgins loving defeat,solo defines epotome of the sex-u-a-l(oser)
doesn't rhyme, or doesn't make sense, depending on wether or not "loser" is part of the line
I'ma beat you till you dead n teach you to be quiet instead
n u went an beat up strobe cos it showed how weak you are in bed
better, but not as good as king's closer

overall- not as consistent as king's, most of the punches were weak...


v/king solo

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