Thread: MeTaFo' vs Kon
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Old 08-22-05, 12:17 PM   #8
flow verse
Light Weight
 
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From: BOSTON
This was feedback posted for Kon

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i think kon got this one.................. but there was alot of self glorification in your verses.... but when you did throw a puch is was pretty good... i think you could have structure your verse a little better.....but the wordplay was there ....metafor i was expecting something better the structure and flow was pretty good but your punches weren't as creative as i was expecting it seemed pretty pre-schoolish ..........desent drop tho good luck to both............
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