This was feedback posted for Kon
IP:
i think kon got this one.................. but there was alot of self glorification in your verses.... but when you did throw a puch is was pretty good... i think you could have structure your verse a little better.....but the wordplay was there ....metafor i was expecting something better the structure and flow was pretty good but your punches weren't as creative as i was expecting it seemed pretty pre-schoolish ..........desent drop tho good luck to both............
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 just like the smilie says . . . can u spit . . .  or u just gonna make me laff
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