Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

Fuck a 6, u get-a-four-fith n I spit-a-whole-clip… then ‘SHOVE-L’s(shovels) like wat u use to ‘dig-a-hole-with’…
3...weak line, concept used before and where's the punch.
I’m killin-him, this is a ‘crime’, but u already know that I sin-hard…
so after this murder, R.V police i'll ‘put me in a CELL’ like ya ‘sim-card’…
4...more original with the concept, but the punch is lacking again.
This is easy, nigga I retire-the-barriers… Who want it? I’m givin this kid his ‘NEXT-L’(Nextel) like the ‘WireLess-Carrier’!
4...this giving L's shit again, everybody has done it before and its gay.

OVERALL: 11/30


Dude, take notes from your sig, Its YOUR Rhymes that are a Fraud
Only time you in control of a win....is if you was workin a Scoreboard
6...decent concept, nice personal, gud punch.
Dear lord....Please dont hate him cause he ugly, an bless him with skill...
You could become a sucide bomber, an you still wont be ''built for the kill''
6...LoL!! i like the 2nd line, decent wordplay and a nice punch, original to.
I'm at the top of the hill, your trynna Re-up from Rock Bottom...
Too end herbs like you I flatline...........Or in other words, I DOT-EM..........................................
5...ok punch, but the flatline concept been used already.

OVERALL: 17/30


khaoz took this easy, had a couple of original concepts and delivered decent punches ,the one bar at the end was a little played but still ok. fraud, ure new and you got ok wordplay, but you need to stop talking about handing out L's cuz that concept played out long ago.

V/ - Khaoz Theory

plz rtf on the battle link that is in my siggy

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