Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

this battle was hard to vote on so i have to do it old school..............

IP:


Fuck a 6, u get-a-four-fith n I spit-a-whole-clip… then ‘SHOVE-L’s(shovels) like wat u use to ‘dig-a-hole-with’…

desent bar.... like the word play..... pretty good ..... 4/10

I’m killin-him, this is a ‘crime’, but u already know that I sin-hard…
so after this murder, R.V police i'll ‘put me in a CELL’ like ya ‘sim-card’…

ok...........not spectacular thought it could have been better 4/10

This is easy, nigga I retire-the-barriers… Who want it? I’m givin this kid his ‘NEXT-L’(Nextel) like the ‘WireLess-Carrier’!

I like the word play good closer ...7/10..my fav. line



Dude, take notes from your sig, Its YOUR Rhymes that are a Fraud

like the personal and use of his name in this verse but kinda basic 4/10

Only time you in control of a win....is if you was workin a Scoreboard
Dear lord....Please dont hate him cause he ugly, an bless him with skill...
You could become a sucide bomber, an you still wont be ''built for the kill''

Like the structure...... hard hitting punches great word play 8/10

I'm at the top of the hill, your trynna Re-up from Rock Bottom...
Too end herbs like you I flatline...........Or in other words, I DOT-EM..........................................

desnt could have been worded better but still a good closer 4/10



fraud ........... 15/30

KhAoZ ThEoRy ....16/30


like i said it was close............ i enjoyed this battle keep writing...both of you

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