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U Dont Want Beef Or You'll Trigger My Inc, So Obay Your Boss..
You Aint Dieting On Mc's So Like Fat People Weight, Ur Expecting A Loss..

could have been better but still a very funny line.. i really liked it

My Punches Like 'The-Art-Of-War, Stabing You With Sharp Objects From 'Hardware-Stores'
Lemme Break This 'PIMP' Like Ya Got 'Larger-Pores'..' Cumming' To Get a 'Beat'in', I've Seen 'SMARTER WHORES'!!

you really need to work on ur structure these lines are really stretch but the content was hard hitting.......... but work on keeping line balance helps make lines easier to read

U Winnin' Battles? Just A 'Matter Of Interaction' - Nothin SHORT-OF-PHYSICS,
Damn U Still Here? I'll Just Leave Your Career Here Short-Lived Like ABORTED-MIDGETS

desent closer.........could have been better.......but sums everything up pretty well.....pretty good drop work on the stuff i mentioned and u'll be even better....keep writing and good luck to both............

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just like the smilie says . . . can u spit . . . or u just gonna make me laff