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Old 08-22-05, 02:55 PM   #35
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Voted For: Natural killa

Structure-Niether had very well structure, young montanna your lines is sorta stretched,NK you verse was a little better structurized but still off at that...

Vocab-Again both had simple vocab nothing appealing to the eye....both up on your vocab to enhance your verse.

Punches-Young montana had better punches that hit harder.Nk had some good punches but didnt hit hard as Young Montana.

Multis-Its clear to see that Nk's multis were more appealing and hott....good creativity....which mad his verse more enjoyable.

Personals-Just check NK'S verse full of personals that were hott and hard hitting....Young montana had iight personals but not as appealing ya dig?

Originality-NK'S verse was more appealing fresh and original.....Young montana...didnt really feel your verse is capable of beating nk's

v/natural killa

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