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Old 08-22-05, 03:47 PM   #26
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Voted For: King Solo

This kids mistaken for talent, but he’s really only a beginner
Cuz with over 100 posts a day, Natural still fails to deliver
rofl good opener ^^ lol he has no life i dont think
Picture ya self as a vet, dude ya misplaced ya self in a day-dream
Puttin on a new ‘Face’ kid, but ya still ain’t makin’ the ‘A-Team’ (2nd)
^^rofl like ateam its funny good punch
Ya believin’ a depiction of fiction, but in reality I’m the killa, that’s factual
So there ain’t no stoppin’ me killin’ you all cuz dude……, it’s just natural
^^ok not ya best
And yo I got 'wordplay' for ure ass, watch as I 'scrabble' ya brains
And my 'structure may seem demolished', but u’ll be 'left in remains' (4th)
^LMMFAO rofl..good connected
I’d say my punches were false, watch him get confused by my verses
Cuz Natural’s idea of a 'pair-a-docs' is a 'duet of hospital nurses' (5th)
rofl......jus got it o.0
See the look on ya face, did I lose ya? Sorry, I know that ya slow
But it’s cool, if ya wanna know why ya lost……just look down below (6th)
LMAO good finisher

good structure good punches great personals...LMAO good verse i neva seen you drop weak yet good flow all fitted in very well

70 wins from dickriders but i'll say u suck freely n give u a throw
n I'll slap you to have ya spirit's in circles so you'll really be soul-o
^rofl...good opener
I'l shoot your mother with paste,kill her,n give yo brother some spray
king?well u outta flirt wit the referee's,cuz u won't try-ump. another way
lol quite funny...shud have wordd it better tho
nK's packing heat like cherynobyl n attacking the weakest nobels
solo sukin testicles with glitter,cos his whackness is known glow-ball
meh...didnt feel this
come from the back quietly n strike with knives n tumtacks all alike
n fractured jaw n broken spine cos you ain't get no feedback on open mics
rofl good
his punches are like water, barely tapping me being so ineffectual
like virgins loving defeat,solo defines epotome of the sex-u-a-l(oser
didnt feel this)
I'ma beat you till you dead n teach you to be quiet instead
n u went an beat up strobe cos it showed how weak you are in bed
meh............

ok you need to work on ya structure an make ya verse consistent seriously...king took this

vote king

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