Thread: Top 10 New Battlers in the RV
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Old 08-22-05, 09:20 PM   #39
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Originally Posted by anxiety
I guess for a 2nd topical it's pretty damn good... But here's some advice...

Get away from whack ass topics like that... Your structure is really stretched as well...

Check this.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=167740

Dope verses from both.



Ooh yea..I seen that battle with Soc....I like your verse against OMB more tho.

And yea..i ussually do stretch my lines in text...thx for peepin it tho.
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