i can see both of yall are elevatin, OSB you came very good, nice flow good stucture held nice together, good vocab a few multiples hittin good, but you use a lot of the basic rhyme get more witty man, osiris not bad your flow was most def good, nice stucture but you lack creativty get into the emotion more get good wit multiples and upp your vocabulary, anyway overall this isn't bad a lil below average but not bad, keep elevatin.

rtf on my new piece frustrated intensions. 1

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