Odi et Amo
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Nice piece, overall a good interesting concept that allows you to work it out in your own way. The emotion was definitely there, I had this feeling it was written straight from the heart. The flow was good, overall it remained solid throughout the entire piece. You had a good balance in your vocabulary: it wasn't too basic yet not too complex either you know.
Keep it up!
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