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Better than you..
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IP:
work more on your flow by trying different word play. try to chop it up a bit more and use styles such as assonance and tighter multi's coz atm it sorta read's with a rigid flow. try to make your shit read more interestingly by like thinking what other peoiple will read and if they will think it's really dope. like your favourite artists and your favourite things try to incorporate more 'marketable' enjoyable to the listener/reader. for instance a party and what make's people wanna dance and rock to, drink to and give u prop's for.
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..ADLIB..
Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred…
Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug…
Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby…
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