Voted For: -UNF-

Mimesis

This shit is fucking ridiculous.. Of course I'ma leave this dude tossed
Cause you're the first kid to call me out.. and then tell me you've lost
^nice personal opener

Just watch and learn.. overused multis, ill leave you on the tile and shit
You do got some hotshh.. nah wait..
..that's just who's style you bit
^hehe good punch

But even he dropped it.. I do act tough.. i'll admit, but whats worse kid
Is I did cry in the notebook.. that you write your fucking verses in
^damn...harsh...

All you post is shit.. may call yourself a champ, ill still roast your teeth
But you're only like Ben Wallace.. cause both you bitches post up weak
^decent wordplay but not really feeling it

See, you ain't on my level.. you can take the loss, its meant for you
Cause I'm gonna be pullin this out.. like what your paps meant to do
^coo punch, seen it a lot of times before though

Your a waste of life.. you cant beat me.. jesus, i dont care what you say
I will get straight to the point.. because the rest of you is gay
^good wordplay but no real punch

So fuck you.. I've won this shit, you're just left huggin the deck
Man, I've sonned you so bad I have to send your mom monthly checks
^nice closer

Solid battle verse here, I felt you had a decent consistency with the hardhitting punches. You added some personal touches to them, fell off in few places where I felt it was more a filler than a real bar but overall quite solid. The flow was good, not always as smooth everywhere but nothing too bad though. The vocab was good, creativity was there and had some wordplay as well.



-UNF-

After Numerous Anal Surgerys To Repair Ya Bunghole Wound’s Ammassed…
There Remains No Drum Rolls…Cos Mimesis Broke Butt..Still…Half Assed…
^hardhitting opening punch

Wouldn’t Be Funky With Knowledge..Passin’ Gas Durin’ AP English & Maths…
Ya Necks Like an Uncircumcized Gash..Someone Give This Malignant Peasant a Bath…
^wordplay is there formed into punch

Like a Lowlife Hobo on The Smash...U Clash For Christmas Presents Amidst Trash…
Ur Jokes Are Malconsumed Like Product’s In Need of Bein Ransacked & Slashed…
^lmao @ first line, aight wordplay in second

M' Use’s a Hand Vac In Reverse To Litter & Mash..He’s Low as Bodily Wasted Gas…
Im Sayin…….Get Blasted With Mace..With Metaphoric Slurs As Im Slashin’ ya Face…
^not feeling second line but the first one's nice though

-UNF-’s Embraced Like Diamond Platinum and Trinkets..Kid.Ur a Trashy Disgrace…
Like Willing Fags U Been Maliciously Raped To The Point Of No Debate Or Escape…
Ya Moms Resembles a…Dead Ape..Sportin’ a Rasta Weave with a Red Cape…
^aight, first line started off bleh but you picked it up and had nice punches

I Literally Hate This Unemployed..Homeless...Engrate…Brutally Neglected’s Ur Definite Fate…
With Gargantuan Arms..-UNF- Grate’s Ur Cranium Till Crushed Like Seed’s of a Red Grape…
^closed it off with good wordplay

Good verse from you, it's the first battle I've seen from you and I must say I was pleasantly surprised by how you come consistent with the complexity. The vocabulary was complex yet it remained understandable, the wordplay was at high level, good creativity as well and you formed it into hard punches. Here and there some filler lines maybe but not that much, the flow was good due to multis and internal rhyming, sometimes bit stretched maybe but overall real good and complex.


Punches: -UNF-
Personals: Mimesis
Opener: tie
Closer: Mimesis
Multies: -UNF-
Wordplay: -UNF-
Flow: tie

In the end my vote goes to -UNF- but this was a very close and good battle from both of you...props...

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