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Old 08-23-05, 09:55 AM   #28
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iight im listenin ...

beats dope but its wayyyy too common shits like be used and abuised so many times..but back to ya feed...lyrics..simple but have deep meanin behind it i can tell...quality is real good..chorus is nothin outer the ordinary but it fits be well you structered it well..nice work...humm you could of had some nice switch ups in ya verse..instead of that slow flow all the way....ok second verse decent as well if you would of dropped some crazy flow switch and kick a few multi chops here and there shit would of been hot..but good work non the less na'mean ..overall i'll give you a 7.5/10..iight be 1ne..
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