"he's holdin 2 grams of coke and a handfull of valiums"-- thats where I started gettin a little impressed-- your delivery isn't great yet, but it really improved, you pronounce your words well, just put more intonation in your voice when you spit, so you don't sound like your just speaking- it sounded like you had the verse memorized well, just put it out a little weak... i like the song though, good material... peesh

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