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Old 08-23-05, 12:31 PM   #31
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both need to work on lienal structure mayne..they were just fucked up...but besides that Unrestricted gets this for comin up with harder punches...his verse made more sense...no personals but his stuff was much more harder plus his verse had a waaaaaaaay better flow...as for batman daw u forced those lil multis....your structure meeds work too and ur punches didnt make sense...they all had me sayin "whaaaa?"...i didnt see tight personals there...and ur verse didnt flow...no hate,no offence yo but elevate..

*trys to remember if this guy is really a vet *

holla at minez with hines and well xplained votes plz...i need 'em closed up...i thank you!!
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