**the council**
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Voted For: Tony Green
a good battle here.....
natural killa- yours was a pretty consistent verse, nice structure, flow and vocab.....however it lacked depth and emotion....and that made it get a bit boring.....so incorporating these in your verse will help to keep it interesting....but overall not bad
Tony Green- a nice verse, NK outshined you with the flow and the vocab however yours was creative enough to take the win and you kept it interesting for the reader throughout...there was some emotion in there too
overall a good battle.....TG takes the win for creativity.......
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