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Old 08-23-05, 02:10 PM   #5
Dickard.
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Voted For: Sin`cere

Structure-Sincere got this one, sin'cere i felt ya lines was too stretched gutta make them end at the same spot to capture a better flow....sincere had better flow

Punches-Sin'cere really had the only good punches in this batttle, sincere didnt really think you ever did diss your opponent....dont know what happened there....sincere you can up on that on your new name

Personals-Just check out the links, sin'cere took it by storm and just ripped his opponent....sincere had lil personals that werent effective in his verse......

Multis-Niether had multis that appealed in there verse was just straight raw disses..which is not a bad thing

Vocab-Again not much vocab into these verses...for future reference i suggest you guys have your vocab enhance as your verse goes on, just a suggestion.....both up on that

Originality-Both had pretty fresh verses, but overall sincere had a very played verse sin'cere man, realy took it with ur raw punches and verse......with that bein said

v/sin'cere

rtf on my open mic's since i kindly analyzed your battle
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