Voted For: Apostrophe

Easy shit for Apos. Let me break down what lost it for you UNF.

You try to be too hardcore, that whole online thug thing is not appealing. Aswell as your multis which in battles do not really matter whatsoever. You need to work on your punches. and try to fix your structure up a little bit man, its not easy to read.

Apos- Decent punches.... and was EASY TO READ. A few decent punches in there but some of them weren't all too great. First bar was about the best and all you really needed to beat him.

Just work on your punches UNF.

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