Voted For: Apostrophe

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Decent verse...nothing special...You had some multies, but thats not what wins a battle...punches and personals are...Although you had punches, you kinda lacked in the personals category, and the punches you had weren't all that nice or creative.

Apostrophe:

Decent verse from you as well. You had decent punches, but some could've been worded better, or been a little more creative. Threw in some personals, they were pretty weak, but you did have them. Both need to up your vocab.

Overall, this wasnt that good of a battle. Both need to be more consistent with punches, but Wet Willy gets my vote.

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