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Old 08-23-05, 06:08 PM   #19
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Voted For: Mimesis

After Numerous Anal Surgerys To Repair Ya Bunghole Wound’s Ammassed…
There Remains No Drum Rolls…Cos Mimesis Broke Butt..Still…Half Assed…
4...ok, whether or not you know...homo shit is played out so pick a new concept to use.
Wouldn’t Be Funky With Knowledge..Passin’ Gas Durin’ AP English & Maths…
Ya Necks Like an Uncircumcized Gash..Someone Give This Malignant Peasant a Bath…
5...ok you got nice vocabs in there, but I am blind to where the real punch is.
Like a Lowlife Hobo on The Smash...U Clash For Christmas Presents Amidst Trash…
Ur Jokes Are Malconsumed Like Product’s In Need of Bein Ransacked & Slashed…
M' Use’s a Hand Vac In Reverse To Litter & Mash..He’s Low as Bodily Wasted Gas…
5...ok, this was a punch just about, but again there is more focus on big words to make it look good than actual punching.
Im Sayin…….Get Blasted With Mace..With Metaphoric Slurs As Im Slashin’ ya Face…
-UNF-’s Embraced Like Diamond Platinum and Trinkets..Kid.Ur a Trashy Disgrace…
4...little multi, but other than that there is nothing that really jumps out and disses Mimesis.
Like Willing Fags U Been Maliciously Raped To The Point Of No Debate Or Escape…
Ya Moms Resembles a…Dead Ape..Sportin’ a Rasta Weave with a Red Cape…
4...again with some homo shit, u still continuing with played shit. 2nd line was mildly funny.
I Literally Hate This Unemployed..Homeless...Engrate…Brutally Neglected’s Ur Definite Fate…
With Gargantuan Arms..-UNF- Grate’s Ur Cranium Till Crushed Like Seed’s of a Red Grape…
4...meh, god damn it, stop using big words and actually throw a punch sometime.

OVERALL: 26/60



This shit is fucking ridiculous.. Of course I'ma leave this dude tossed
Cause you're the first kid to call me out.. and then tell me you've lost
5...ok personal punch here, but not that hard hitting really.
Just watch and learn.. overused multis, ill leave you on the tile and shit
You do got some hotshh.. nah wait..
..that's just who's style you bit
6...better punch here, wud've been better if he used hot's style in this battle, but still nice.
But even he dropped it.. I do act tough.. i'll admit, but whats worse kid
Is I did cry in the notebook.. that you write your fucking verses in
5...i've seen a few punches based around this kind of concept, so its not highly original.
All you post is shit.. may call yourself a champ, ill still roast your teeth
But you're only like Ben Wallace.. cause both you bitches post up weak
5...pretty average bar, its a punch but not a real hard one.
See, you ain't on my level.. you can take the loss, its meant for you
Cause I'm gonna be pullin this out.. like what your paps meant to do
6...LoL!! first line was kinda plain, but the 2nd was funny.
Your a waste of life.. you cant beat me.. jesus, i dont care what you say
I will get straight to the point.. because the rest of you is gay
6...ok, naturally homo shit is played, but on the rare occassion it is used well its funny.
So fuck you.. I've won this shit, you're just left huggin the deck
Man, I've sonned you so bad I have to send your mom monthly checks
5...played concept, funny punch but the concept is played which ruins it a little.

OVERALL: 38/70



ok, weak battle here.....Mimesis didn't really bring his best stuff but it was still enough to get him the win. he had some nice punches in there but a few that were average and some played concepts used to. UNF....poor drop from you, you've done better and here your problem was that you didnt really get down to real punches to diss mimesis with, you focused more on putting in big words to make ya verse look impressive and throwing in a couple of multies. but clearly mimesis took this with ease. No Hate At All.

V/ - Mimesis
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