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Old 08-23-05, 06:27 PM   #20
J. Luth
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Voted For: Mimesis

aiight um, let's see this:
This shit is fucking ridiculous.. Of course I'ma leave this dude tossed
Cause you're the first kid to call me out.. and then tell me you've lost
eh... it's ok, yo......... could have been better. was personal tho... 5/10
Just watch and learn.. overused multis, ill leave you on the tile and shit
You do got some hotshh.. nah wait..
..that's just who's style you bit
lol nice personal.......... 6/10
But even he dropped it.. I do act tough.. i'll admit, but whats worse kid
Is I did cry in the notebook.. that you write your fucking verses in
lol word... nice........... 6/10
All you post is shit.. may call yourself a champ, ill still roast your teeth
But you're only like Ben Wallace.. cause both you bitches post up weak
lol another nice line... good shit wit wallace.... 7/10
See, you ain't on my level.. you can take the loss, its meant for you
Cause I'm gonna be pullin this out.. like what your paps meant to do
lmao.......... dope....... 8/10
Your a waste of life.. you cant beat me.. jesus, i dont care what you say
I will get straight to the point.. because the rest of you is gay
lol word........ 7/10
So fuck you.. I've won this shit, you're just left huggin the deck
Man, I've sonned you so bad I have to send your mom monthly checks
lmao........... 9/10

Overall, man your shit started out aiight... but then you picked it up at the end wit the ill punches. Had nice personals too. Reall good shit man. loved the closer and pullin' out line. Dope shit.... 48/70


aiight UNF:
After Numerous Anal Surgerys To Repair Ya Bunghole Wound’s Ammassed…
There Remains No Drum Rolls…Cos Mimesis Broke Butt..Still…Half Assed…
nice shit here............ 6/10
Wouldn’t Be Funky With Knowledge..Passin’ Gas Durin’ AP English & Maths…
Ya Necks Like an Uncircumcized Gash..Someone Give This Malignant Peasant a Bath…
... ehh it's ok........ 4/10
Like a Lowlife Hobo on The Smash...U Clash For Christmas Presents Amidst Trash…
Ur Jokes Are Malconsumed Like Product’s In Need of Bein Ransacked & Slashed…
not great punch............. 5/10
M' Use’s a Hand Vac In Reverse To Litter & Mash..He’s Low as Bodily Wasted Gas…
Im Sayin…….Get Blasted With Mace..With Metaphoric Slurs As Im Slashin’ ya Face…
[eh].... no punch really? ......... 3/10 [/b]
-UNF-’s Embraced Like Diamond Platinum and Trinkets..Kid.Ur a Trashy Disgrace…
Like Willing Fags U Been Maliciously Raped To The Point Of No Debate Or Escape…
it's ok...not hard....sayin' they raped? ok........ 4/10
Ya Moms Resembles a…Dead Ape..Sportin’ a Rasta Weave with a Red Cape…
I Literally Hate This Unemployed..Homeless...Engrate…Brutally Neglected’s Ur Definite Fate…
With Gargantuan Arms..-UNF- Grate’s Ur Cranium Till Crushed Like Seed’s of a Red Grape…
uhhh..... ok.......... 5/10

Overall, dude, I don't kno who told you multi's is all that matters in a battle, because it ain't. It's good to use, but shouldn't be all you doin'. Cuz I mean fo reel, you really didn't have one punch in there tthat could be called witty, or even atleast one personal. None of that was there. I mean really, and also the big word usuage. Not really a good idea to use huge words that some people won't even kno what i t means..... but overall, shit was aiight 27/60

Vote= mimesis, for harder punches and personals. easy...
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