Voted For: Brandon

this was a cool battle from both of you

Kwar N. Teen -

smoldered n charred, cant carry my weight - so ya shoulders are scarred.
plus like experts at limbo, to even compete you had to lower the bars..?
kinda weak. not really feeling this line right here..5/10

press ya flesh, leave ya 'lines shook' like 'mistakes on an etch a sketch'.
i flex the wess, battlin K? i thought 'brand (k)new' i was 'fresh to death'..
this was an ok bar..your first line was better than the second..5/10

i'll make ya chestless, i 'stole ya shine' - might as well 'take ya necklace'.
cause fuck effort!.. i could 'eat bran half asleep' like 'flakes for breakfast'..
this was better. good punch...6/10

no one cops ya trash, hesitate to shoot N trust - i react and pop ya fast.
stop, ya trash! see 'don-key whack', that explains why ya 'drops are ass'..
very funny. your best bar. i liked this one...8/10

24/40
I think you need to get more punches in there. you had some decent wordplay but none of it was formed well enough to make a hard hitting punch. i would like to see more personals also. other than that, your closer was really funny.

Brandon -
You changed the rules when you set it....well then I guess you're gay...
If you ate cereal it would be the only time you'd be Special......K?...
very funny line. wish you coulda set it up better though. good wordplay...8/10
You stink bad and ya verses are more ass...so that's what the stench is...
I would pitch you an idea...but you would need a baseball to catch it...
decent wordplay. but kinda played concept...6/10
2 days...fuck that...I will just end you now...cuz we all know this fella is swept...
If directions told faggotness....right being Straight....then he's left...
gay jokes are kinda played as well...5/10
You could spit a good verse....but you might as well not even try this...
I'll Kwar N Teen this bitch...like I'm Spam Blocker and he was a virus!
very good closer. good wordplay and good personal...8/10

27/40
You had some decent punches in here. You only had one personal but that was still cool. Good wordplay. Your verse was on point. Flow was good. Just work on some better wordplay cause a lot of concepts are played out.


Brandon wins

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