Two things em yes it is poerty Deamon and if you can't see the concepts
dont comment,.... Dam.

Alright sis I thought this was really good, it flowed really well regardless of
what Dea said at times u lost it but in poetry it dont matter which is what
this verse clearly is.

Vocab was alright I thought but elevation is needed, Strc was alright as well
I felt the meanin of this verse and the message you was putting across.

Stay up

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