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Old 08-24-05, 11:45 AM   #7
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lol...nive verse there closer was funny...and opner was tight....kap definitely had more punches that hit way harder and structure was better...its also helped on improving your flow...ur verse was clare..i mean i cud understand every line but batman's verse got me sayin ehhhhh? in some lines...for example


i got u in a madd tight bind
my rymes wil make u go blinder than blind

^^ say whaaaa?...blinder than blind

hey dont git me wrong dawg there aint no hate
i bet u could get ur brother to be ya damn date

^^ that was an aimless punch...made n sense..no hate tho

but i must say batman that ur closer was decent..

kapital had this shit goin mayne...be it in structure,flow,punches,metas and so on...his verse was much more entertainin than batmans...so with this he gets my vote...

plz drop and honest and well xplained vote in one of my battles thanx
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