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Old 08-24-05, 11:52 AM   #4
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nice battle yo...

but metafo gets this for a more fluent and well structured verse...he had harder punches and much irony which gave his verse more humour...and yeah personals were cool too...as for intermental bro you sure did have somethin there but this guy had u on flow and structure..i think u need to fix it up a lil and then u'ld be iight...props to both tho..keep it up..

ps: plz holla at one of my battles with honest and well xplained votes...thanx

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