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Old 08-24-05, 03:57 PM   #22
Sean Gunner
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Mimesis
This shit is fucking ridiculous.. Of course I'ma leave this dude tossed
Cause you're the first kid to call me out.. and then tell me you've lost
Haha, nice punchline. Decent personal.
Just watch and learn.. overused multis, ill leave you on the tile and shit
You do got some hotshh.. nah wait..
..that's just who's style you bit
Lmao. Nice personal. Tile thing was random, but ya.
But even he dropped it.. I do act tough.. i'll admit, but whats worse kid
Is I did cry in the notebook.. that you write your fucking verses in
Eh, ok punch.
All you post is shit.. may call yourself a champ, ill still roast your teeth
But you're only like Ben Wallace.. cause both you bitches post up weak
Beast from the east, nah bad punch.
See, you ain't on my level.. you can take the loss, its meant for you
Cause I'm gonna be pullin this out.. like what your paps meant to do
Fake personal, you started off so well too.
Your a waste of life.. you cant beat me.. jesus, i dont care what you say
I will get straight to the point.. because the rest of you is gay
Gay punch man? No
So fuck you.. I've won this shit, you're just left huggin the deck
Man, I've sonned you so bad I have to send your mom monthly checks
Daddy punch....*sigh*

You started off good, but then your creativity got worse and worse.

UNF
After Numerous Anal Surgerys To Repair Ya Bunghole Wound’s Ammassed…
There Remains No Drum Rolls…Cos Mimesis Broke Butt..Still…Half Assed…
Really choppy and forced line. No real punch.
Wouldn’t Be Funky With Knowledge..Passin’ Gas Durin’ AP English & Maths…
Ya Necks Like an Uncircumcized Gash..Someone Give This Malignant Peasant a Bath…
Ok....lotta vocab nothing else.
Like a Lowlife Hobo on The Smash...U Clash For Christmas Presents Amidst Trash…
Ur Jokes Are Malconsumed Like Product’s In Need of Bein Ransacked & Slashed…
M' Use’s a Hand Vac In Reverse To Litter & Mash..He’s Low as Bodily Wasted Gas…
He colided with christmas presents? Only attempt at punch was last line.
Im Sayin…….Get Blasted With Mace..With Metaphoric Slurs As Im Slashin’ ya Face…
-UNF-’s Embraced Like Diamond Platinum and Trinkets..Kid.Ur a Trashy Disgrace…
Like Willing Fags U Been Maliciously Raped To The Point Of No Debate Or Escape…
No punch, self glorification, and a bunch of nonsense. Slurs meaning something else? Come on.
Ya Moms Resembles a…Dead Ape..Sportin’ a Rasta Weave with a Red Cape…
I Literally Hate This Unemployed..Homeless...Engrate…Brutally Neglected’s Ur Definite Fate…
With Gargantuan Arms..-UNF- Grate’s Ur Cranium Till Crushed Like Seed’s of a Red Grape…
Again, bunch of nonsense

Ok, you have absolutely nothing in this verse. A bunch of vocab and wording that ruins any attempt at a punch you have. Do YOU even know what you are saying?

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