Thread: i miss u daddy but..Fuck you
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Old 08-24-05, 04:13 PM   #10
Dickard.
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had lots of emotion, i felt your anger, good use of vocab.....nice structure, gave it good flow..over all im feelin that this is an excellent piece 8/10...keep it up....girl nice job
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