this songs was pretty sick...i'm going to be hard on you because i'm all about elevation...your flow is a lot better in this song...but you still try to stretch out rhyming words a little bit too much...chorus is my least fave part...it's too simple...and although most emotional songs don't need to be lyrical, this hook should be a little more...ya dig...quality is getting better...the subject matter was pretty dope, you painted a decent picture in my head. you can still do better, you rush songs a little too much. But the heart and drive is there over almost anyone i know...good shit...keep it rollin...sometimes your words got a little muddy...the first 6 bars were fuck fire...lgood shit...i like that flow
7/10...

flow 7
lyrics 5
emotion 9
beat 8
hook 5

good shit

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